Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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I went to Mar de las Pampas, it´s a town on the beach. I was with my girlfriend, we rented a hut so near to see. we was walking around, and we was walking to the beach too.
I can recommended us the cavalcade on the beach, it´s so wonderfull. there are nice horses and nice places too.
I can recommended us the cavalcade on the beach, it´s so wonderfull. there are nice horses and nice places too.
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I went to the Mar de las Pampas, it´s a town on the beach. I was with my girlfriend, we rented a hut so near to see. We were (plural form) walking around, and we were walking to the beach too. I can recommend you to see (??) the cavalcade on the beach, it´s so wonderful. There are nice horses and nice places too.
Very good!
Estoy de acuerdo con SimpsonM... Tenga cuidado con plural.
Hi Diegus, very good exercise, well done! Sharon :) I went to Mar de las Pampas, it´s a town on the beach. I was with my girlfriend, we rented a hut so near to the sea. We was were (I was/ We were) walking around, and we was were walking to the beach too. I can recommended us the cavalcade on the beach, it´s so wonderfull. there are nice horses and nice places too.
Nice try Diegus but we need more practise.
Add me as a friend and we can work together
I went to Mar de las Pampas, it´s a town on the beach. I was with my girlfriend, we rented a hut so near to see the sea. We was were walking around, and we was were walking to on the beach too.I can recommend us the cavalcade on the beach, it´s so wonderfull. there are nice horses houses and nice places too to visit..
I went to Mar de las Pampas, it´s a town on the beach. (it's better to say it's a beach town) I was with my girlfriend, we rented a hut so near to seae. we was (were) walking around, and we was walking to the beach too. I can recommended (I can recommend) us the cavalcade on the beach, it´s so wonderfull. there are nice horses and nice places too.