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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today is hot and sunny. He needs sunglasses. Tomorrow will be cold and cloudy. We will need a sweater. The day after tomorrow will snow. She will need a scarf, a hat, and a coat for being warm.
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  • Tony
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    The day after tomorrow it will snow. She will need a scarf, a hat, and a coat for being to keep warm.

    va a nevar = it will snow, it's going to snow

    You need a coat to keep warm

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  • duncan_mcintosh
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    coat for warmth .or to keep warm

    the day after tomorrow it will snow .or will be snowing oll

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  • Nellie Gardner
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    Today is hot and sunny, he needs sunglasses. Tomorrow will be cold and cloudy we will need sweaters. The day after tomorrow it will snow. She will need a scarf, a hat, and a coat to be (keep) warm

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  • L*
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    I agree with the comments!

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