English Writing Exercise

Directions to your house

Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, provide directions for a guest from the nearest bus stop to your house. Which direction should your guest go? Where should he turn? What will he see on his way to your house? How will he recognize your house?

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Peterman
The last school I attended is the High School of Getafe. His name is "Carlos III", because this is the name of a old king from Spain.
I graduate at two thousand five when I passed my last subject. I studied subjects about mathemathics, phisics, programming, etc.
I have a good memory from this years, because I had more free time than now!!
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Submitted: 2009-01-31 14:12:23




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  • 2009-01-29 19:59:34
    Natalie
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    Good effort! Some corrections I can offer: The last school I attended is was the High School of Getafe. His Its name is "Carlos III", because this is the name of a an old (I'd rather to say "ancient") Spanish king from Spain. I graduateD at IN the year two thousand five fifth when I passed my last subject exam (or complete the last course). I studied subjects about mathemathics, phiYsics, programming, etc. I have a good memoryIES from OF this years, because I had more free time than now!!

    Keep up practicing!

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  • 2009-01-30 00:46:03
    BeBeLinda

    Hi- Very good!

    The last school I attended was the High School of Getafe. His Its name is "Carlos III", because this is the name of an old king from Spain. I graduated in at two thousand and five when I passed my last subject class. I studied subjects about mathemathics, physics, programming, etc. I have a good memories from those years, because I had more free time than now!!

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  • 2009-01-30 01:11:05
    Ros B

    Excellent Effort

    The last school I attended was The Carlos III High School in Getafe, named after an old  King  from Spain. I graduated in two thousand five after passing my last subject.  I studied mathematics, physics, programming ect. I remembered more from those years because I had more free time than now.

     

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  • 2009-01-30 08:00:26
    Tikuna
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    The last school I attended was the High School of Getafe. It's name is "Carlos III", because this is the name of an old king from Spain. I graduated it in  2005 when I passed my last subjects. I studied subjects like mathemathics, phisics, programming, etc. I have  good memories from those years, because I had more free time than now!!

     

    There are some grammar mistakes, try to do more grammar exercises.

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  • 2009-01-30 14:17:42
    Debanjan
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    The last school I attended is the High School of Getafe. ITS name is "Carlos III", because this is the name of aN old king from Spain. I graduateD at 2005 when I passed my last subject. I studied subjects LIKE mathemathics, phYsics, programming, etc. I have a good memory OF THESE years, because I had more free time THEN than now!!
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  • 2009-01-31 14:12:23
    erin

    Cuando usas el pasado, como "the last school", usas "...was the High School of Getafe." En ingles, decimos "The last school I attended was Getafe High School." Y, el nombre de quien?

    Decimos: "I graduated in two thousand five." Bien!

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