Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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my vocation is in next week. i am going to floripa. the place is so wonderful! there many things to see. beautiful beachs, nice bar, good people to talk. let's go with me?
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I am going to travel to the beach in february first, because I will take vocation of the be on vacation from my work this day. In the morning I will walk in on the beach, at twelve thirty I will eat many things delicious things in my favorite restaurant and at the night I will dance at Balli Hay with my friends. This will really be fun!
Porque "delicious things"e não o contrário? Porque o adjetivo sempre vem antes do objeto a que se refere, ok?
I am going to travel to the beach on February first because I will take a vacation from work on this day. In the morning I will walk on the beach, at twelve thirty I will eat many delicious things on my favorite restaurant and at night I will dance at Balli Hay with my friends. It will really be fun!
Great job :)