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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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It is snowing today, but isn't very cold (about 5 celcius). In this part of planet very often snowing. It is supposed tomorrow will be such weather as today.
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  • Katja
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    Today it is snowing , but right now not very cold (about - 5 degrees celsius ). In this part of planet it's very often snowing. I suppose that tomorrow weather will be the same as today's.
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  • Ron English
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    Paul, Here is how it should be written: It is snowing today and isn't very cold. It's about 5 celcius. In this part of the world it snows often. It is supposed to be the same weather tomorrow as today.
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  • allegro24dreame...
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    Paul, That was a nicely written submission :) You should also try doing some of the audio to continue practicing...
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  • likuna66
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    bien :)
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