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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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The man has three sport cars and two motorcycles.
The woman has four sisters and three brothers.
The girl has six dolls and five friends.
The boy has two dog and nine hamsters.
You have three beautiful cousins and two brothers.
I have a sister and two stepsisters.

I have twenty four years old and my sister has thirty years old.
Beky has fourteen cats and twenty nine birds.
Michael has eleven balls and he does not have ten balls
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  • Aalia
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    Wow, this is great! Just a few errors but only little ones, I am impressed with what you have written, it's very good.

    The man has three sport cars and two motorcycles. The woman has four sisters and three brothers. The girl has six dolls and five friends. The boy has two dogs and nine hamsters. You have three beautiful cousins and two brothers. I have a sister and two stepsisters. I am twenty four years old and my sister is thirty years old. Beky has fourteen cats and twenty nine birds. Michael has eleven balls and he does not have ten balls.

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