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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

๑۩۞۩๑MARTHA๑۩۞۩...'s submission: Average Rating:
At the café
Everytime I go at the café, of course I always order a coffe drink with a slice of carrot cake (I know I am wrong but I love this kind of cake and I can not resist it!!) and if I am hungry I also order a veggie sandwich or sometimes just a salad.
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  • mcarthey
    Mochapoints: 7159  |  Teacher Score: 3125 (100%)

    Great job at expressing your thoughts.  Only a couple of minor changes to make.  Instead of "go at the cafe" say "go TO the cafe".  You could use the word 'at' if you were to phrase it as, "I am at the cafe", but you "go to" a place.

    Also, we would just say "coffee" when referring to it instead of "coffee drink".  You can order a 'drink' or order a 'coffee', but use the words separately.

    Great job!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • ๑۩۞۩๑MARTHA๑۩۞۩...
    Mochapoints: 6344  |  Teacher Score: 2910

    Thank you so much for your help MCARTHEY.  I will be careful with my exercises!

    Submitted over a year ago

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