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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

beibei the fish's submission: Average Rating:
It's March 11, 2008 today. It's a very warm spring day, with breez. People usually feel very good with such weather. As for the weather tomorrow, I suppose, It will be another fine day, I have not heard any forcast, though.
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  • LadyCat
    Mochapoints: 2107  |  Teacher Score: 933 (100%)
    You did very well . Just check your spelling . You left out the e in breeze, Also you should say with a breeze. Other than that, keep up the good work.
    Submitted over a year ago
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