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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

Patricia R.'s submission: Average Rating:
The last time i went shopping was last week. I bought a white blouse and a pair of jeans. The blouse cost $30.00 and the jeans $40.99.
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  • Graham
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    This is fine.
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    Good job
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    very bad
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  • Patricia R.
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    Thanks!! :0)
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    Good work,keep it up
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    A REAL GOOD JOB
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    NICE WORK....
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    ALWAYS capitalize the personal pronoun, "I."

    Otherwise, excellent!

    Stan ^_*
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