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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

Patricia R.'s submission: Average Rating:
My last vacation was last year on November. I went with my family to San Antonio Tx. Went to El Alamo and Sea World. My favorite place was Sea World because the delfines and Shamu.
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  • Graham
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    in November (in before months)

    We went to El Alamo

    because of the dolphins

    Keep going.
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  • Pedagogue
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    My last vacation was last year in November. I went with my family to San Antonio Tx. We went to El Alamo and Sea World. My favorite place was Sea World because of the delfines dolphins and Shamu seals (Did you mean seals or something else !?)

    Nevertheless, very good try !
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  • Lucia
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    My last vacation was last year in November. I went with my family to San Antonio, TX. We went to the Alamo and Sea World. My favorite place was Sea World because of the dolphins and Shamu.

    Very good. "Dolphins" is a tough word to spell.

    Keep practicing.

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  • Boneman ♫♪
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    "My last vacation was in November of last year on November. I went with my family to San Antonio Tx. We went to the Alamo and Sea World. My favorite place was Sea World because of the dolphins and Shamu the whale."
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  • flipper2
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    last year IN November

    WE went

    because OF the DOLPHINS and shamu

     
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  • SL2SA
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    My last vacation was last year in November. I went with my family to San Antonio, Tx. Went to El Alamo and Sea World. My favorite place was Sea World because of the delfines dolphins and Shamu.
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  • JB
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    What is "Shamu"??? Some Japanese monster that fights whit Power Rangers? 

    :0)
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  • Patricia R.
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    Thanks everybody for all your corrections. SHAMU IS A KILLER WHALE, IT IS ON SEAWORLD! AND IT IS CUTE. :0)
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