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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 1

Describe the location of your city and country

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the locations of your city and country. Which countries are located north, south, east, and west of your country? In which corner of the country is your city located? Describe which cities are located north, south, east, or west of your city.

shuangyu's submission: Average Rating:
My name is shuangyu.I'm from Anhui,China.I'm of medium bild and I have beautiful long black hair.I like reading and pop music.
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  • Oliver Winston
    Mochapoints: 983  |  Teacher Score: 880 (0%)
    Excellent - you just need to capitalize your name and correct spelling of "bild" = BUILD.
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  • Mi
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  • Mi
    Mochapoints: 3876  |  Teacher Score: 2612 (100%)
    Excellent job!!! :) My name is Shuangyu. I'm from Anhui, China. I'm of medium build (bild) and I have beautiful long black hair. I like reading and AND LISTENING pop music. Before each comma or point it is necessary a space. Your name must begin with capital letter
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  • shuangyu
    Mochapoints: 635  |  Teacher Score: 122 (0%)
    Thank you very much. I'll study hard .
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  • mrlum_2001
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  • mrlum_2001
    Mochapoints: 978  |  Teacher Score: 465 (0%)
    Nice description. If I were you I would say: "I am a beautiful girl with long black hair." Keep writing!
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  • Awen
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  • Awen
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    Excellent writing. Please write more about yourself. We want to know you more 双语.
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