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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 5

Comparisons and Superlatives

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from the lesson, compare a set of objects. EX. This dog is bigger than that dog.

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Feb 9th is the china festival of lanterns.At this day, people will hang the red lanterns on their doors or eaves.In general the lanerns on doors is bigger than the eaves.At villages people will dance in china tradition. because there are so many people in cities,so people will celebrate in burning fireworks.
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  • forget-me-not
    Mochapoints: 2981  |  Teacher Score: 1022

    Chinese Festival of Lanterns

    people hang - Present Simple (repeated action)

    lanterns ARE bigger

    according to Chinese tradition

    i think "celebrate with burning fireworks"

    Thank you for this interesting exercise :)

    You are freat and interesting, as usual

    Great job!!! :)
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  • forget-me-not
    Mochapoints: 2981  |  Teacher Score: 1022

    I meant great not freat :) sorry
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  • dmcgimpsey
    Mochapoints: 7678  |  Teacher Score: 6259

    Very good - remember to capitalize proper nouns such as China and so on ... also the first letter in a sentence needs to be capitalized.
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  • jrb
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    Good. Some suggestions:

    "Feb 9th is the Chinese festival of lanterns. On this day, people will hang red lanterns on their doors or eaves. In general, the lanterns on the doors are bigger than those on the eaves. In (the) villages, people will dance in Chinese tradition. Because there are so many people in the cities, people will also celebrate by burning fireworks."
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  • worldmikel
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    Something must be wrong with Livemocha. The question appears about comparing things and you have written a story about the Lantern Festival....

    I hope they get this fixed.
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  • Ania
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