What are you doing this week?
Instructions:
What are you doing this week? What activities are you doing? When? Which days will be the busiest?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 2
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i am going to work every day, but yesterday was sunday and i do not was to work. my vocation from college end in july 9th,after this, i wake up at 6 o'clock every day. i am working 9 hours on suturday and 6 on sunday.
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I'm sorry for the bad score, but you need a lot of help with this.
First, since you are pretty advance in English, you should know by now to capitalize the first letter of the first word. Never forget the basics!
Next, well, there are a lot of major mistakes here, i'll just write out how this should have looked:
"I am going to work everyday, but yesterday was sunday, and I do not go to work. My vacation from college ends in July 9th, after this, I wake up at 6 o'clock every day. I am working 9 hours on Saturday and 6 on Sunday."
Since there is such a multitude of mistakes here, I'm just going to give you some pointers. Also, I really do want to help you, but I don't like JUST giving out answers, it is no help to you whatsoever.
*Write out everything, meaning numbers. It helps your English so much, trust me.
*Reread everything. Look for your own mistakes.
*Capitalize things like months and days of the week. That's not a tip, it's just part of English.
Message me, and i'll help you work on this if you want.
The word "I" should always be capitalized, no matter where it is in a sentence. The best way to describe what you want to say is:
I go to work every day but Sunday. Since yesterday was Sunday I did not go to work. My vacation from college ends on July 9th. After it ends, I will wake up at 6 o'clock every day. I will work 9 hours on Saturday and 6 hours on Sunday.