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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4

A Shopping Trip

Instructions: Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

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I'm gone to decathlon with my girlfrend last time.
We are buying a equipment for mountain, a rackets for snow a heavy clothing and a bag.
when i go to shopping in that store a want to buy all store. I like almost all sport, i try it many: baseball, football, swimming in the pool,skiing on ski and snowboard,cycling and gym . but i prefer a snowboard and walk on mountain with my girlfriend. now i go tree times a week to gym and when i have time we go on montain.
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  • ila
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     I recently went to decathlon with my girlfriend. We bought an equipment for mountain, snowshoes and rackets, a heavy clothing and a bag. when I go shopping in that store i would buy everything. I like almost every sport, I tried many: baseball, football, swimming, skiing and snowboarding, cycling body building. However my favourite are snowboarding and walking in the mountains with my girlfriend. currently I go to the gym three times a week and I have some free time I go to the mountain.

     

    bravo piccolo 
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  • elif
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    exercise wants to use past sımple and past countınues tıme tense ok .. otherwise you are good but try it at the past tense
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