English Writing Exercise Needs and Wants
Instructions:
Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.
First, come to the Shibuya station and take using the yamanote line. And Then take one bus there and 1 hour riding the bus from there for 1 hour and it will bring you to my near bus stop. Then, you can see my house.
Very good! Keep practicing sentence structure.
cut the first "the", after "line" cut the full stop and "and", and put a comma there^^
Very good.
My only correction is that you should not start a sentence with "And". You do not need "And" for that sentence.
Keep up the good work
Very good... minor mistakes already pointed out.