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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today it’s Saturday 07. Febrary 2009, 2009-02-07. It is very hot. The sun shins braid and it’s not one cloud on the sky. In the evening will bee raining. Not in the city but out said. For tomorrow will be sun shin in the morning and in the noon cloudy and for the evening strong rain with rays.
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  • Xian
    Mochapoints: 511  |  Teacher Score: 45 (0%)

    The sun is shining brightly and there isn't a cloud in the sky. In the evening it will be raining. Not in the city but outside. Tomorrow the sun will be shining in the morning and it will be cloudy in the afternoon and in the evening there will be heavy rain with rays.

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  • johnptracy
    Mochapoints: 13136  |  Teacher Score: 2750 (100%)

    Today it’s Saturday 07. Febrary 2009, 2009-02-07. It is very hot. The sun shins braid and it’s not one cloud on the sky. In the evening will bee raining. Not in the city but out said. For tomorrow will be sun shin in the morning and in the noon cloudy and for the evening strong rain with rays

    Today is Saturday February 7, 2009. It is very hot. The sun is shining brightly, and there's not one cloud in the sky. It will rain in the evening. It won't rain in the city, but here, outside. Tomorrow there will be sunshine in the morning. At noon it will be cloudy. In the evening there might be heavy rain and lightning.

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