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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

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The women are not nurses. They are doctors.
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  • Aleandra
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    Good but it would be more helpful if you wrote more.
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  • Anyaletta
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    Yes this is perfect, but I agree  -  write more!  You know you can.

     

     
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  • loveyaoi101
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    good
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  • kira_miki
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    Right, you understood this theme!~
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  • LiveLearnPlayDi...
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    Perfect, as long as you got the idea.
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  • Katie
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    well done! :)

    you should try writing more examples
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  • tiffgirl
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    Very good! Try to describe what they are wearing or doing, too.
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