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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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In spring , I often read or lie on the grass. Sometimes I play sports with my friends. That's a good place which make me relax.
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  • Oliver Winston
    Mochapoints: 983  |  Teacher Score: 880 (0%)
    Just add THE for spring. "In THE spring, I often read or lie on the grass." The second sentence is correct, however, the third sentence is not clear... what makes you relax?
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  • wangsl
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    what makes you relax?
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  • Mi
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  • Mi
    Mochapoints: 3876  |  Teacher Score: 2612 (100%)
    In Spring, I often read or lie on the grass. Sometimes I play sports with my friends. THE GRASS. What (That's) a good place which make me relax. Spring begins with capital letter.
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  • Texasbuckaroo
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  • Texasbuckaroo
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    Shuangyu, Very well done. The 1st two sentences are correct. The third sentence is not clear. Where is the place that makes you relax? If you were to say, "The park is a good place that helps me to relax." it would be more correct. Keep up the good work.
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  • shuangyu
    Mochapoints: 635  |  Teacher Score: 122 (0%)
    Thank you very much. I'm thankful~~~
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  • Awen
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  • Awen
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    双语, 你写得很好。 The park is a good place that helps me relax. The park is a good place to relax.
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  • Henrique _ 恩裏克
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    yeah Relax is good ^^
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  • shuangyu
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    Thank you .
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