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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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There are six white houses. Four houses are not white. They are black, brown, yellow and grey each.
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  • Katie
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    There are six white houses. Four houses are not white. They are black, brown, yellow and grey each.

    - good! :)

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  • Mati
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    Don't need "each". But a nice job overall.

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  • Aleandra
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    They are black, brown, yelow and grey.

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  • escanne
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    Nice job! Just one error.

    There are six white houses. Four houses are not white. They are black, brown, yellow and grey each

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  • Judy
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    Very good! Just try to add more sentences next time!

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  • kaxandra
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    There are six white houses. Four houses are not white. They are black, brown, yellow and grey each.

    (",)

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