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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

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two months ego I went to a town here in Medellin. Its name is Guatape. It is a beautiful pleace. It is warm and it has a lake and there is a big stone, up on the stone you can find restaurants and many things.
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  • Jan
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    Mochapoints: 58117  |  Teacher Score: 20074 (87%)
    Very good. Here is my comment (I'm also new learner) : The last place I vacationed in Guatape two months ago.
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  • GB Fred
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    _Two months ego I went to a town here {in # near??} Medellin. Its name is Guatape. It is a beautiful _place. It is warm, _ it has a lake and there is a big _rock. [Up] on the _rock you can find restaurants and many things.

    pebble « stone « boulder « rock

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