Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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My last vacation was New Years vacation.
I went home, and celebrated New Years with my family.
My mother made "oseti" on 31, Dec.
I made "sushi" on 1, January.
We ate "oseti" and "sushi" in New Years day.
I went home, and celebrated New Years with my family.
My mother made "oseti" on 31, Dec.
I made "sushi" on 1, January.
We ate "oseti" and "sushi" in New Years day.
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Corrections: My mother made "oseti" on dec. 31st. I made "sushi" on January 1st. We ate "oseti" and "sushi" on New Years Day.
Dec.
Thank you!!
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