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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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Someone is sitting on the hard chair, and he is eating a very cold ice cream, A small cat is fighting with a big dog, I'm sitting on the soft seat. The old and heavy elephant is sitting in one clean and quiet place.
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  • juliana
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    very good!!congratulations!!

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  • Mari
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    Good....
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  • Mari
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    Good....
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  • cozjh
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    Someone is sitting on the hard chair, and he is eating a very cold ice cream. A small cat is fighting with a big dog. I'm sitting on the soft seat. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

    Sounds more natural like this.

    Good job!

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  • karinachile1980
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    Bien ..felicitaciones

     

    Submitted over a year ago

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