English Writing Exercise

When and where?

Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

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Manuel Baj...
The woman is going to the beach at three o´clock. The man is going to the work at seven thirty. A girl is going to the airport at two o´clock. The boy is going to play to the park at eight past ten. You are going to the library at eleven o´clock. I am going to read the book at five after nine.
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Submitted: 2009-02-20 19:32:53




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  • 2009-02-20 03:01:38
    Schatten
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    ¡Absolutamente bueno! "...The man is going to the work... The boy is going to play at the park...." This is sophisticated grammar!  You are improving!
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  • 2009-02-20 06:42:09
    harla
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    The man is going to the work at seven thirty.

    The boy is going to the park to play, at eight past ten.

    just switching the positions allows you to keep all of the words.

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  • 2009-02-20 12:29:34
    Lucimara Zanini...

    I pretty much agree with the other comments and corrections.... keep doing to god work.

     

    Luci

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  • 2009-02-20 15:05:43
    Rainie

    The woman is going to the beach at three o´clock. The man is going to the work at seven thirty. A girl is going to the airport at two o´clock. The boy is going to play to in the park at eight past ten. You are going to the library at eleven o´clock. I am going to read the book at five after nine.

    Good work!

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  • 2009-02-20 16:15:49
    Erin
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  • 2009-02-20 19:32:52
    Sunny
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    Excellent !

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