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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
The man has short black hair. He does not have brown hair.
The woman has a long red hair. She does not have a short hair.
The boy has a red ball. He does not have a black ball.
I am not bald. I have short brown hair.
You have no hair. You are bald!
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Carolina Moraes
    Mochapoints: 4314  |  Teacher Score: 798 (100%)

    Muito bom, muito mesmo!!!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • SherryTav
    Mochapoints: 9261  |  Teacher Score: 900 (0%)

    Really good work! Just be careful when you describe the woman's hair---no a is required---just long red hair, etc.

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  • Cesar
    Mochapoints: 6511  |  Teacher Score: 609 (100%)

    Very good! good job!

    Submitted over a year ago

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