What are people going to do?
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.
The woman is going to run on the street.
The man is not sleeping in bed.
The man is going to read a book.
The woman is not driving to go the car... oh my God, nooo please, no woman and car, iisss baaad... jaja I am kidding xD.
The girl is going to play in the park.
The boy is not playing, he is sick.
The fat boy is going to eat the food.
The thin girl is not eating the food. :(.
You are going to write a book.
You are not change your clothes. xD.
I am going to give a new photo.
I am not smiling in my new photo :(.
Submitted over a year ago
English Writing Exercise 
Terrific writing!
Good joke about women drivers!!!! LOL
The boy is not playing; he is sick. You need a semicolon (;) when connecting two independent clauses with a conjunction.
You are not changing your clothes.
I am going to post a new photo. I assume that you mean you are going to "put" a new photo on your Livemocha profile. If you are going to "give" a new photo, your sentence would require an object. You are going to "give" a new photo "to whom?" If you are operating the camera, you would "take" a new photo.
Bravo!
no entiendo el frase: The woman is not driving to go to the car. no es corecto celim... pero quiza tu prentendes: the women is going te drive the car.
y esta: you are not changING your clothes.
y esta: im not smiling at my new foto.
y esta: no women IN the car.
pues esta muy bien celim. pronto puedamos hablar english:)
Good work Celinluna. You are getting better each time. I am not sure what xD means so didn't correct it.
The woman is not driving to go the car... oh my God, nooo please, no woman women (I assume you mean more than one and so should be plural) and car, iisss baaad... jaja ha ha. I am kidding xD. The boy is not playing; he is sick. You are not going to change your clothes. xD. I am going to give put-up (or post) a new photo. I am not smiling in my new photo. :(.
Francophile has it right again. keep up the good work. And thanks for the joke too!
Great job, and fun reading! Francophile, and other comments are spot on, nothing more to say than that.
The woman is going to run on the street. The man is not sleeping in bed. The man is going to read a book. The woman is not driving to go the car... oh my God, nooo please, no woman and car, iisss baaad... jaja I am kidding xD. The girl is going to play in the park. The boy is not playing, he is sick. The fat boy is going to eat the food. The thin girl is not eating the food. :(. You are going to write a book. You are not going to change your clothes. xD. I am going to give a new photo. I am not smiling in my new photo :(.
jaja = haha.. In Spanish the "j" makes the same sound as the "h" in English.
Example - joven (Spanish) hotel (English)