Describing household objects.
Instructions:
Describe the objects in three rooms of a house. EX. The rug is in the hallway. A mirror is outside the closet. The kitchen sink is in the kitchen.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 2
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The sofa is in the livingroom.
The computer is on the table.
The bathroom sink is in the bathroom.
My clothes are in the closet.
My pant is on the bed, I am naked now xD.
A mirror is inside the closet.
The flower is on the table, in the livingroom.
The TV is in the bedroom.
The radio is in the bathroom.. ooo dangerous.. -O_o-.
The window and rug is in the hallway.
My red car is in the garage.
The computer is on the table.
The bathroom sink is in the bathroom.
My clothes are in the closet.
My pant is on the bed, I am naked now xD.
A mirror is inside the closet.
The flower is on the table, in the livingroom.
The TV is in the bedroom.
The radio is in the bathroom.. ooo dangerous.. -O_o-.
The window and rug is in the hallway.
My red car is in the garage.
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Excellent writing!
Living room is two words.
My pants are on the bed. I know this is weird! Pants is plural even when we are speaking of one "pair of pants" as we say it.
The flower is on the table in the living room. You do NOT need the comma(,).
The window and rug are in the hallway. You have two subjects and, therefore, require the plural form of the verb "to be."
Keep up the good work!
muy bien celim!! muy bien. el mismo falses yo mire si el mujer abajo.
besos
Very good work Celinluna. Your punctuation is excellent. I have made some changes in yellow and questions are in green.
The sofa is in the living room.(living room is two words) My pants is are on the bed. I am naked now. xD (I'm not sure what this means?). The flower is on the table in the living room. The radio is in the bathroom.. ooo dangerous.. -O_o-. (again, not sure what this means?) The window and rug is are in the hallway.
good job! Franchophile got the corrections right. Keep up the good work and put some clothes on.
The sofa is in the livingroom. The computer is on the table. The bathroom sink is in the bathroom. My clothes are in the closet. My pants are on the bed. I am naked now xD. A mirror is inside the closet. The flower is on the table, in the livingroom. The TV is in the bedroom. The radio is in the bathroom.. ooo dangerous.. -O_o-. The window and rug are in the hallway. My red car is in the garage.
Good work.