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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 3

When are the activities?

Instructions: Provide the time for the activities of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The girls are reading a book at nine o’clock. The boys play in the bedroom at seven thirty.

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The woman is runing at the street at five o'clock.
The men are playing tennis at seven thirty.
The boy will get up at five fifteen.
The girl is washing at seven fourty.
You are eating at twelve o'clock.
I will go to visit my friend Thijs at one fourty five, the saturday of next weekend.
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  • Big A
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  • Jacquie
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    Since there was time mentioned in the following statements it is assumed it is in the past and therefore the verbs used should be past verbs.

    The woman is was runing at  in the street at five o'clock. The men are were playing tennis at seven thirty. The girl is was washing at seven-fourty. You are were eating at twelve o'clock. I will go to visit my friend Thijs at one fourty-five, the next Saturday. of next weekend.

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  • Francophile
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    Great work!

    The woman is RUNNING IN the street at five o'clock.  You must double the "n" in running in order to get the "short" vowel sound.  As a rule, when only one consonant follows the vowel, one would get the "long" vowel sound.  Listen to my recording for a demonstration of this.

    The girl is washing at seven FORTY.  I know, I know, 4 is four; but 40 is forty!  It is confusing!

    Again, I will go to visit my friend Thijs at one FORTY-five (45 must be hyphenated (-). . . . . . We would more likely say "I will go to visit my friend . . . . NEXT SATURDAY."

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  • macrawfo
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    Good comments by the others!

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  • Thijsje
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    jaja really? you arrive at 1:45?

    I will be that time at the terminal waiting for you!

    you did good a job with your lessons.

    bye!

    Submitted over a year ago

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