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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 4

When and where?

Instructions: Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

Celinluna's submission: Average Rating:
The woman is going to work at seven o'clock.
The man is going to the beach at nine fifteen.
The girl is going to the school at six o'clock.
The boy is going to the park at three thirty.
You are going to the restaurant at twelve five.
I am going to the bathroom now.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Big A
    Mochapoints: 3631  |  Teacher Score: 2093 (0%)

    Good work.

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  • sandra
    Mochapoints: 833  |  Teacher Score: 608 (0%)

    good

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  • Thijsje
    Mochapoints: 2620  |  Teacher Score: 53 (0%)

    muy bien celim. pero cuando a chico va a escuala. deces:

    the boy is going to school. 

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Jacquie
    Mochapoints: 21720  |  Teacher Score: 20570 (100%)

    Good work Celin.  Corrections are in yellow.

    The man is going to the beach at nine-fifteen.  The boy is going to the park at three-thirty. You are going to the restaurant at twelve five  five after twelve (option 12:05). 

    Submitted over a year ago
  • macrawfo
    Mochapoints: 14437  |  Teacher Score: 7085 (100%)

    Jacquie got the corrections right.  Keep up the good work and the humor!

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  • Francophile
    Mochapoints: 13811  |  Teacher Score: 5922 (0%)

    Bravo!

    The only correction I can find is that we would say "twelve O five" or "five minutes after twelve."

    Great work!

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