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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 3

Needs and Wants

Instructions: Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.

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ok...the friend I am giving my address is Kamila...I invited her to come to my house for dinner. Kamila you are in the downtown so please...you should take the bus, the one what is named "P1" because I am living in the Pradera neighborhood. When you get to the Military School, in la Pradera please stay there. Then walk two blocks through the 22 street to the bypass street when you get there turn right to the alley...my house is sitting in from of a park where there is a big tree. take care.
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  • Jess
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    Ok.  The friend I am giving my address to is Kamila.  I invited her to come to my house for dinner.  Kamila, you are in the downtown so please take a busThe bus name is "P1" because I live in the Pradera neighborhood.  When you get to the military school in La Pradera, please get off the bus.  Then, walk two blocks through 22 Street to the bypass street.  When you get there, turn right into the alley.  My house sits in front of a park where there is a big tree.  Take care.

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