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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

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The woman is going to buy a book, the woman is not going to buy a book, the man is going to eating food, the man is not going to eating food, the girl is going to buy a book. the girl is not going to buy a book, the boy is going to listen to some music, the boy is not going to listening to some music, you are going to drive a car, you are not going to driving a car.
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  • Kristel
    Mochapoints: 4345  |  Teacher Score: 2823

    Learn where to end your sentence using period.

    The man is going to eat food

    no -ing in eat because of the "to"

     

    Good try anyway

     

     

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  • Suzie
    Mochapoints: 8650  |  Teacher Score: 1200

    hi..your job are great...

    just some mistakes...

    The woman is going to buy a book, the woman is not going to buy a book, ( its ok)

    the man is going to eating  ( to eat - you never use to before esating or any word with final "ing") food, the man is not going to eating (TO EAT)food, the girl is going to buy a book. the girl is not going to buy a book, the boy is going to listen to some music, the boy is not going to listening( TO LISTEN) to some music, you are going to drive a car, you are not going to driving(TO DRIVE) a car.

    "ing" in english is the same as u use " chal rahe"

    good luck n keep going..

     

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  • nitzy
    Mochapoints: 13851  |  Teacher Score: 780 (0%)

    Hi, I agree with the corrections.  Keep going and practice more!

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  • life goes on!!
    Mochapoints: 3227  |  Teacher Score: 220 (0%)

    keep going!! :)

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  • zeema
    Mochapoints: 55056  |  Teacher Score: 18031 (94%)

    good practice well

    Submitted over a year ago

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