Transportation
Instructions:
What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1
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I live in the Pushkin suburb of Saint-petersburg. It is 20 km from the Center. I have few options how me to get in to the center. First way is go by foot then by the train and by the subway. It's usualy take one hour. Second way is go by the bus and then by the subway. It's also take about hour. And the end, most convinion way is go by own car. It's not cheaply, but can take only thirty minuts.
For my travel i use the bus and the train and of course my foot!
For my travel i use the bus and the train and of course my foot!
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Ty zhuvosh v Puskine village? I went there! it was an azming plaace. I also went to saint petersburg. that was ace.
I live in the Pushkin suburb of Saint-petersburg which is 20 km from the Center. I have a few options how me to get in to the center. The first way is to go by foot and then by the train and by the subway. It's usually takes one hour. The second way is go by the bus and then by the subway which also takes about hour. In the end, the most conveniant way is to go by own car. It's not cheaply, but can take only thirty minutes. For my travel I use the bus and the train and of course my feet!
Ok not bad, but don't forget TO + infinitave always.
and The + noun, unless you are going by something.
I live in the Pushkin suburb of Saint-petersburg. It is 20 km from downtown. I have few options for getting to downtown. First way is going by foot and then by train and subway. It's usually take one hour. Second way is going by bus and then by subway. It's also take about hour. And the end, most convenient way is going by own car. It's not cheap, but can take only thirty minutes. On my way I use the bus and the train and of course my feet!
Ok!
Go ahead!!!
Pushkin is not village))) Formally it is the distict (or one of the part) of S-Pb. If you are going to here, let me know!
I live in the Pushkin suburb of Saint-Petersburg. It is 20 km from the center. I have several ways of getting to the center. One way is to go by foot, then go by train and subway afterwards. Travel usually takes one hour. Another way is to ride the bus, then take the subway. It also takes about an hour. Finally, the most convenient way is to go by car. Although it may not be cheap, travel takes only thirty minutes. For my travel, I use the bus, the train, and of course my feet!
*Great work Fairylive!
nice work!
Good work! Most have already showed you the problems, so I have only two comments:
I live in the Pushkin suburb of Saint-petersburg.
(understandable, but would not usually be said this way)
Better: I live in a suburb of Saint Petersburg called Pushkin.
It usualy takes one hour. ... It also takes about hour.