Describe your clothes
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?
I live in Tokyo where is the busiest and the most exiting city in Japan. There are so many place to see and activities you can enjoy through a year.
If you visit Tokyo in spring, I strongly recommend to go to the Imperial Palace to see cherry blossoms. Hundreds of cherry trees are planted around the Palace and all around are covered with beautiful pink carpet at the time of full blossom. The view is totally magnificent.
There are also many stands for food. So you can enjoy good food while you see beautiful blossoms.
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English Writing Exercise 
...Tokyo which is........you can enjoy throughout the year...recommend (that) you go to....The view is (really) magnificent.....the beautiful blossoms
VERY GOOD MARI O
Thank you for really helpful review, billwallace! :)
Agree with billwallace.
I live in Tokyo where (which) is the busiest and the most exiting city in Japan. There are so many place to see and activities you can enjoy through a (throught the) year. If you visit Tokyo in (the) spring, I strongly recommend to (that you) go to the Imperial Palace to see (the) cherry blossoms. Hundreds of cherry trees are planted around the Palace and all around are covered with beautiful pink carpet at the time of full blossom.(bloom) The view is totally magnificent. There are also many stands for food. So you can enjoy good food while you see (the) beautiful blossoms.