Login with Facebook
Forgot your password? I do not have an account
Your information will be remembered for 2 weeks only.

English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

Kuma's submission: Average Rating:
I went to Grampian National Park in Australia one years ago.
There are many camp site.
This allows the visitor to enjoy their hiking and see a view of the beautiful scenery.
Submitted over a year ago

Please Login to Review this Submission

Login



Reviews

  • shubhojeet79
    Mochapoints: 449  |  Teacher Score: 222 (0%)

    I went to Grampian National Park in Australia one year ago. There are lot of camps site. This allows the visitor to enjoy their hike & get a beautiful view of the scenery.

    Submitted over a year ago
    Translate
  • brian
    Mochapoints: 4310  |  Teacher Score: 3024 (100%)

    Good!

    I went to the Grampians National Park in Australia one year ago.  There are many camp sites.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Blackbird
    Mochapoints: 47660  |  Teacher Score: 47335 (100%)

    I went to Grampians National Park in Australia one years ago. There are many camp sites. This allows the visitors to enjoy their hiking, and see a view of the beautiful scenery.                                                              I went to Grampians National Park in Australia one year ago. There are many camp sites. This allows the visitors to enjoy their hiking, and see a view of the beautiful scenery.

    Submitted over a year ago
    Spelling:
    Proficiency:
    Grammar:

Tips for Good Reviews:

Be Specific
  • Give useful suggestions and examples.
  • Write more than just brief comments like “Good job” or “Needs work".
Make Corrections
  • Use the editing features to apply strikethrough, bold or different font colors.
  • Use the virtual keyboard to insert special characters in your reviews.
Teach by Example
  • Review a speaking exercise by recording your own audio comment.
  • Focus on correct pronunciation and speaking patterns.