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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

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The date for today is March 22, 2008. It is Saturday. It is the month of March.
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  • 3T XY
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    Hi. Sometimes we translate from our first language. Is better: Today's date is....
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    Great. I might have included Saturday with the first sentence. I think it might read easier and sound smoother. "Today is Saturday, March 22, 2008." Eliminate the last sentence. Good job....
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