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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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There are five cakes.Two cakes are ugly .Three cakes are not ugly .They are preparations in house.
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  • miji
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    you  are  good

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  • Istvan
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    They are preparations in the house no tiene sentido en ingles. Si quiere decir "estan preparado en casa" seria: they are prepared at home. Si no, no se que quiere decir.

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  • Arif
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    There are five cakes.Two cakes are ugly.Three cakes are not ugly .They are preparations in house home-made.

    Comment 1) Good efforts. The following guidelines will help you more.

    Ues these patterns

    There are seven cars. Five cars are black. Two cars are not black. They are red.

    There are ____ ____ .  ____ ____ are ____ . ____ ____ are not ____ . They are ____ .

    There are two flowers. One flower is purple. One  flower is not purple. It is pink.

    There are ____ ____ .  ____ ____ is ____ . ____ ____ is not ____ . It is ____ .

    The following examples will help you to make more sentences on your own.

    1) There are seven towels. Four towels are green. Three towels are not green. They are white.

    2) There are five dogs. Two dogs are small. Three dogs are not small. They are big.

    3) There are seven candles. Five candles are red. Two candles are not red. They are green.

    4) There are three purses. Two purses are expensive. One purse is not expensive. It is cheap.

    5) There are three tree. Two trees are green. One tree is not green. It is barren.

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