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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is wednesday, march 4 th. The day is cold and it is raining a little. here there are not seasons, most of the time is summer and sometimes it is rainning. Temperature is 24-26 C. It is difficult to speak about the weather tomorrow. If today it is rainning, maybe tomorrow it will be a hot day or maybe it is still raining. maybe in the morning it is hot and in the aftrnoon it is rainning.
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  • Svetlana
    Mochapoints: 6145  |  Teacher Score: 1014 (100%)

    Today is wednesday, march 4 th. The day is cold and it is raining a little. here there are not seasons, most of the time IT is summer and sometimes it is rainning. Temperature is 24-26 C. It is difficult to speak about the weather tomorrow'S WEATHER. If  it is rainning today, maybe tomorrow it will MAY be a hot day or may be it is MAY still BE raining. maybe IT MAY BE HOT in the morning it is hot and RAINY in the aftrnoon it is rainning.

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  • kjhitzel
    Mochapoints: 686  |  Teacher Score: 71 (0%)

    Today is Wednesday, March 4 th. It's cold today and raining a little. There are no seasons here, most of the time is summer and sometimes it is rainning. Temperature is 24-26 C. It is difficult to determine the weather tomorrow. If it's raining today, maybe tomorrow will be a hot day or maybe it will still be raining. Maybe in the morning it is hot and in the aftrnoon it is rainning. -----

    Your English is so much better than My Spanish :)

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  • GB Fred
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    rain, rained, rained (raining.)

    En inglés, todos los nombres propios, los nombres de continentes, países, ciudades, océanos, mares y lagos, montañas y valles, tienen su letra inicial mayúscula, al igual que cualquier título que posee, y los adjetivos derivados de ellos y los sustantivos derivados de los adjetivos, los nombres de días y meses también y el pronombre sujeto de la primera persona. Por ejemplo, "the Spanish" = «el pueblo de España», "Spanish" = «la lengua española», "Mount Everest" = una montaña en el Himalaya, "Friday" =  «viernes», "July" = «julio», «Yo» ="I" mayúscula para distinguirla de (iv + ii = vi)

    Today is _Wednesday, _March 4th. The day is cold and it is raining a little. _Here, there are no_ (cantidad) seasons; most of the time, _it is summer and sometimes it is _raining. {The temperature is / Temperatures _are} 24-26 C. It is difficult to speak about _ tomorrow's weather. If today it is rainning, maybe tomorrow {it will be _ hot _ = _ will be a hot day} or maybe it _will still _be raining. {Maybe in the morning it will be hot and in the aftrnoon it will rain. = It may be hot in the morning but in the aftrnoon it may rain.}

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