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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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I order a sandwich and a piece of pastry.my favorite drink is coffee,so I order a cup of cofee too.Well,these are what I order at the cafe.Please help me check the homework,thanks o lot!
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  • language learne...
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    perfect :)

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  • Laura
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    Start every new sentence with a capital letter. I usually order... some pastry. My favourite...; a lot.

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  • Paulo
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    Very good!

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    When I go to a café I usually order a sandwich and some pastry. My favorite drink is coffee, so I order a cup of cofee too. Well, these are what I order at the cafe. Please help me check the homework, thanks o lot!

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  • Daisy
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    well done! prctice more,you can manage it better!

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  • angiline
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    that's great,

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  • camille
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    When I go to a café I order a sandwich and a piece of pastry. My favorite drink is coffee, so I order a cup of cofee too. Well, these are this is what I order at the café. Please help me check the my homework. Thanks a lot !

    Very good. Use capital letters at the beginning of each sentence. Live some space after comma and between sentences.

    Submitted over a year ago

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