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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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Last weekend I went to the park near my house.At first I read a book for an hour ,then played table tennis for two hours,finally I came back home at 5:00 pm.I have a good afternoon.
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  • language learne...
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    I have had a good afternoon

    rest is all gud
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  • Bobby
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    Last weekend, I went to the park near my house.   At first I read a book for an hour, and then played table tennis for two hours.  Finally I came back home at 5:00pm.  I had a good afternoon.

    Overall, good effort.
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  • Laura
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    I agree with the previous partner. Good luck!
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  • Paulo
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    Very good!

    Bobby's review is complete, go by it.
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  • ola1st
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    Last weekend, I went to the park near my house.At first I read a book for an hour ,then I played table tennis for two hours and finally I came back home at 5:00 pm.I have had a good afternoon.
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  • Sky
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  • angiline
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    I had a good afternoon
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  • Imene
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    good

    i'd (i has) a good afternoon
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  • Billie
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  • abria
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    i am glad to hear that you are fall in love playing table-tennis,which is my favorite sport game. in some time we can have a chat on this topic.
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  • Victoria
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    good!!!!!!!!!!!
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