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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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If I go to the park,i will play sports, which are very exciting and cool,such as roller coaster,motianlun,and so on.they can make me lose myself and stimulate my callous nerve.i think the park is not a good place to read.i like reaking alone in the forest.of course,there is no dangerous animals.
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  • Dawn
    Mochapoints: 12679  |  Teacher Score: 6227 (100%)

    If I go to the park,I will do sports, which are very exciting and cool, such as roller coaster, motianlun and so on, they can help me lose weight and stimulate my callous nerve. I don't think park is a good place for reading. I like reading in the forests alone, of course, there is not dangerous animals.
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  • Elie
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