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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4

A Shopping Trip

Instructions: Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

Deepali Varshne...'s submission: Average Rating:
I don't really like shopping at all. The last time I went shopping must be for sure to the local grocery store. My mother does the shopping for me.
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  • Utkarsh
    Mochapoints: 10811  |  Teacher Score: 8230 (100%)

    Good job..

    Although its entirely correct, I would have put the sentence this way...

    I don't like shopping at all. OR I don't really like shopping.
    Submitted over a year ago
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