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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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The old man is bald. The young man is not bald. She has black, curly hair. I have long, brown hair. The boy does not have red hair. He has blonde hair. The man has a red beard and a moustache. The woman does not have a beard. She has short, black hair.
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  • Persia
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    You have just copied your speaking exercise here! It is not a good way for learning English. You should write your own answers.

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  • silviak
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    Estoy de acuerdo con Persia.

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  • Rhience
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    Great! :)

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    good work

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  • Tulip
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    goooooooooood work ^_^

    Submitted over a year ago

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