Describing your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1
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I went to breakfast in a cafe near my house, I was hungry and hurry. I ordered toats, some cheese and eggs. To drink I ordered a delicious coffee, which is my favorite drink.
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I went to breakfast in a cafe near my house, I was hungry and (in a) hurry. I ordered toats, some cheese and eggs. To drink (*see below) I ordered a delicious coffee, which is my favorite drink.
"To drink I ordered" is OK English, but to my ear sounds a bit funny. No big deal , but in colloquial language I would tend to say, "For a drink I ordered", or even "as a drink I ordered"
very good, one spelling error:
I went to for breakfast in a cafe near my house, I was hungry and in a hurry. I ordered toasts, some cheese and eggs. To drink I ordered a delicious coffee, which is my favorite drink.