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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

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These are not silver coins. These are gold coins.
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  • Nitschke66
    Mochapoints: 22708  |  Teacher Score: 21152 (100%)

    1) I would probably start the 2cnd sentence with "They" since you already referred to the coins in the first sentence.

    2) Your spelling is good. But, I would think you would want to write more than two sentences.
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