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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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I HAVE SELECTED MY PROFILE PICTURE.BECAUSE THAT IS ONE OF THEM IN MY BEST WALLPAPER.I LOVE WITH ALL MY FRIENDS IN LIVEMOCHA SO.
MY HAIR COLOUR IS BLACK.MY HAIR IS SHORT.MY EYES COLOUR IS BLACK.NO I HAVE'NT FACIAL HAIR.
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  • kajalnoire
    Mochapoints: 2058  |  Teacher Score: 256 (0%)

    I have selected my profile picture because it is one of my best wallpapers. 

     

    I love all my friends on livemocha so. 

    The colour of my eyes is black. 

    No, I have no facial hair.

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