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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

GHAZALI's submission: Average Rating:
I GOES PARK AND PLAY WITH MY GIRLFREIEND.
AND MANY OTHER CHILDRENS WHO IS MY NEIGHBOUR.AND READS BOOK IN PARK.YES MY BEST PLAY IS BADMINTON,CRICKET & CHESS.
YES I READS IN TENTH CLASS ON RANGLAL HIGH SCHOOL.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • kiwi
    Mochapoints: 29029  |  Teacher Score: 15292 (100%)

    I go and play in the park with my girlfriend and many other children who live nearby.  I read books in the park.  I love playing badminton, cricket and chess.  I read in tenth class at Ranglal High School.

    Good to see your submission here Ghazali.  You did a good job.  I like playing badminton too but I am not good at chess!  

    Take care my friend.  :)

     
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  • GHAZALI
    Mochapoints: 642  |  Teacher Score: 448 (0%)

    very well,but quality and grammer is not so well.
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  • Sapão "Big Frog...
    Mochapoints: 3017  |  Teacher Score: 527 (100%)

    good

     

    "I read books in the park"

     

    (no caps lock please)
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