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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 2

Describing household objects.

Instructions: Describe the objects in three rooms of a house. EX. The rug is in the hallway. A mirror is outside the closet. The kitchen sink is in the kitchen.

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In the bedroom, there is a double bed, a lamp is on the table by the bed, an orange rug is on the floor at the foot of the bed, a dresser and a mirror is opposite at the bed.
In the living room, there is a television, a couch is opposite at the television, a tea table is by the couch, a blue rug is at the foot of the tea table.
In the dining room, there are six chairs and a table, some food is on the table, a bunch of flowers are on the table.
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  • rubyrose
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    A lamp is on the table beside the bed. A dresser and a mirror are opposite at the bed.
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  • Azu
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    Very good

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  • PATMK_69
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    Dear Sun jian, you english skill is better than me, just have some errors which you pass or forgot to notice :

    * A lamp is on the table by beside the bed.

    * An orange rug is on the the floor at the foot foot of the bed,

    * A dresser and a mirror are opposite ...... (beside, bottom) of the bed.

    * a couch is opposite at the television.

    * a tea table is beside the couch. (You can use "near" instead of "by")  ex. A tea table is near the couch. (I'm not sure "by" is incorrect or not? but I never use like that, maybe is correct, pls open your gramma book guide, then let me know later, thank you)

     

    Submitted over a year ago

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