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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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In my last vacation i went to the beach. I goint to the beach in car all the traject but i come back in train.
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  • Jeanelle
    Mochapoints: 1566  |  Teacher Score: 128 (0%)

    Hi buu5!  Well done, here are some points:

    - "On my last vacation I went to the beach"

    - "I went to the beach by car, but I came back by train"

    Maybe practice the past tense a little bit more! Keep up the good work.

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  • Elena
    Mochapoints: 3662  |  Teacher Score: 1008

    I went to the beach on my last vacation. First I went by car but I came back by train.

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