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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2

Running Errands

Instructions: Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

JF's submission: Average Rating:
I will buy a white shirt with my wife next week

I need to sell the car for my daughter on Sunday, but alone

In Some time I have to go to the birthday of a friend with my family

I have great urgency to do the exercises in English for next Monday
Submitted over a year ago

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  • -Jᴏɴ-
    Mochapoints: 267639  |  Teacher Score: 260896 (100%)

    Quite good.  A few corrections:

    I will buy a white shirt with my wife next week.  I need to sell the car for my daughter on Sunday, but alone. In Some At some time I have to go to the birthday of a friend with my family. I have great urgency to must do the exercises in English for next Monday

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • fof
    Mochapoints: 9118  |  Teacher Score: 2988 (0%)

    I will buy a white shirt with my wife next week. I need to sell the car for my daughter on Sunday(it is not clear for me you sell your car to your daughter or you are selling daughter's car). but alone AT Some time I have to go to the friend's birthday with my family. I have great urgency to do the exercises in English for next Monday urgently. Hope it helps. :)

    Submitted over a year ago
  • JF
    Mochapoints: 1406  |  Teacher Score: 194 (0%)

    Very, very much my friends!!

    JF

    SP -Brazil

    Submitted over a year ago

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