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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 4

When and where?

Instructions: Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

Liliana's submission: Average Rating:
A woman is going to the beach now. A man is going to the work at seven o'clock. A girl is going the store. The boy is going to the school at nine o'clock. You is going in the house every day at the past thity eleven. I`m going to the university every day.
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  • MichaelNZ
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    A woman is going to the beach now. A man is going to the work at seven o'clock. A girl is going to the store. The boy is going to the school at nine o'clock. You are going to the house every day at the past thity eleven. I`m going to the university every day.

    well done!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Lindemberg
    Mochapoints: 36825  |  Teacher Score: 34579 (100%)

    Great!

    Note:

    "You're going to the..."

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  • Gabumon
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    Michael is right about the gramatic.

    I guess that u must use The instead of A

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