English Writing Exercise

When and where?

Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

Author:
Liliana
A woman is going to the beach now. A man is going to the work at seven o'clock. A girl is going the store. The boy is going to the school at nine o'clock. You is going in the house every day at the past thity eleven. I`m going to the university every day.
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Submitted: 2009-03-17 03:08:19




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  • 2009-03-16 01:17:55
    MichaelNZ

    A woman is going to the beach now. A man is going to the work at seven o'clock. A girl is going to the store. The boy is going to the school at nine o'clock. You are going to the house every day at the past thity eleven. I`m going to the university every day.

    well done!

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  • 2009-03-16 20:02:03
    Lindemberg
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    Great!

    Note:

    "You're going to the..."

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  • 2009-03-17 03:08:18
    Gabumon
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    Michael is right about the gramatic.

    I guess that u must use The instead of A

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