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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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The girl has twenty - five flowers and seven candles. The man has four trucks and five cars. The house has ten bedroom and six bathrooms. The boy has fifteen years age. He is young. I have twenty - two years age and many years of the study. My sister has fourteen years age. She has twenty - five shirts and forty - six skirts. My school has thirty doors and one hundred - two ladders and fifty - four windows.
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  • Daniel Miles
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    It was pretty good.  But, in English we don't describe someone's age with "has twenty-two years age"

    We say "I am twenty-two years old."  "The boy is 15 years old"

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  • salome
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    The house has ten bedrooms. The boy is fifteen years old.I am twenty - two years old. I have been studing for many yaers.My sister is fourteen years old.

    Submitted over a year ago

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